Mumbai Local Ki Baarish
"Mere papa bhi..." I started, then stopped. "Satara mein, woh farmer the. Humble life. Jab main choti thi, woh mujhe har roz ek nayi kahani sunate the. Simple stories, but full of wisdom."
"Kahan hain woh ab?"
"Ghar pe hi hain. Mummy ke saath. Siddharth - mera chhota bhai - Pune mein padh raha hai. Engineering."
"And you? Yahan akeli?"
I nodded. "Naukri mil gayi, toh aana pada. Rohan ke saath flat share kar rahi hoon. Woh bhi Satara se hai, par uska nature bilkul alag hai - extrovert, talkative, social butterfly."
Kabir laughed. "Sounds like my mom. Sujata aai, I call her. She runs a small home kitchen from our apartment. Marathi snacks, homemade thecha, that kind of thing."
"That's so nice," I said sincerely. "Mujhe yahan bahut miss hota hai ghar ka khana."
"Toh kabhi aao na," he said casually, then caught himself. "I mean... if you want. Mom would love to meet you. She keeps saying, 'Kaun hai yeh ladki jiske liye tu roz umbrella leke bhaagta hai?'"
I blushed furiously. "Tumne unhe bataya?"
"Neha," he turned to face me, his eyes serious. "Maine unhe kuch nahi chhupaya. From day one, I told them about the girl from Satara who looked at Mumbai like it was trying to eat her alive."
"And now?"
"Now?" He smiled. "Now I think you're starting to own it."
He reached out and gently tucked a wet strand of hair behind my ear. His fingers brushed my cheek, and I felt electricity run down my spine.
"Kabir..."
"Sorry, I shouldn't have..."
"Nahi, it's okay," I whispered. "I just... I'm not used to this. Back home, everything was simple. Arranged marriage talks, family introductions, the whole process. Yeh... yeh spontaneous wali feeling..."
"Scary hai?" he asked softly.
"Thodi," I admitted. "But achhi scary."
He took my hand then. Just held it, our fingers intertwining under the shelter of that tea stall roof, while Mumbai rained around us like it was celebrating something.
---
July 5, Sunday
"Neha, phone!" Rohan shouted from the living room.
I ran out, expecting work call. It was Kabir.
"Kya hua? Subah-subah?"
"Kuch nahi, bas... aaj free ho?"
"Ha, Sunday hai na."
"Toh... meri mom ne pucha hai, dinner pe aogi? She's making varan bhaat and bharli vangi. Said it's her special 'impress the girl' menu."
My heart hammered. "Kabir, it's too soon..."
"I know, I know. No pressure. But she's been asking for two weeks, and I keep making excuses. Plus..." he paused. "I want you to meet her. She's important to me. And... you're becoming important too."
I looked at Rohan, who was making exaggerated kissing faces at me. I kicked him.
"Theek hai. Address bhejo."
---
Kabir's apartment was in an old Dadar building - the kind with narrow staircases and the smell of agarbatti in the corridors. But when his mother opened the door, I felt instantly at home.
Sujata aai was everything Kabir had described and more. Warm eyes, greying hair tied in a neat bun, wearing a simple cotton saree, and a smile that could melt glaciers.
"Arre, aa, aa! Kitni sundar hai tu!" she exclaimed, pulling me into a hug before I could even say namaste. "Kabir ne bataya nahi ki tu itni pyaari hai!"
"Mummy!" Kabir groaned from behind me.
"Kya mummy? Sach bol rahi hoon. Aao, beta, baitho. Chai piyogi? Coffee? Maine fresh basil leaves ka sherbet bhi banaya hai, garmi ke liye achha hai."
The apartment was small but filled with warmth. Photos of Kabir's childhood on the walls, his father's picture in the corner with a small diya burning beneath it, and the kitchen - oh, the kitchen smelled like heaven.
"Kabir ne bataya ki tu Satara se hai," Sujata aai said, serving me the sherbet. "Mazhi bahin bhi wahan rehti. Kitna miss karti hogi ghar?"
"Bahut," I admitted. "Yahan sab alag hai. Fast, loud, crowded. Par..." I glanced at Kabir, who was setting the table. "Par ab achha lagne laga hai."
Sujata aai followed my gaze and smiled knowingly. "Samajh gayi."
Dinner was a feast. The varan bhaat was exactly like my mother's, and the bharli vangi was even better.
"Kabir ke papa ko yeh bahut pasand tha," Sujata aai said, watching her son eat. "Har Sunday banati thi. Ab main banati hoon, unki yaad mein."
"Aai," Kabir said softly, "aap ro mat."
"Nahi, nahi, aaj khushi ka din hai. Neha pehli baar aayi hai ghar mein."
After dinner, Kabir and I sat on the small balcony while Sujata aai cleared up inside.
"Kaisa laga?" he asked.
I looked at him - at his nervous expression, at the way he was fidgeting with his phone, at the boy who shared his umbrella with a stranger just because she looked scared of the rain.
"Kabir," I said, taking his hand. "Mujhe pata nahi tha ki Mumbai mein itna ghar jaisa feel ho sakta hai."
His eyes widened. "Matlab?"
"Matlab... yeh ghar, yeh balcony, yeh baarish, tumhari mom..." I leaned my head on his shoulder. "Mujhe laga tha main yahan sirf naukri karne aayi hoon. Par shayad... shayad yahan kuch aur bhi mil sakta tha."
He wrapped his arm around me, pulling me close. It was a cozy hug, the kind that feels like home and promise and safety all at once.
"Neha," he whispered into my hair, "main jab bhi baarish dekhta hoon, ab sirf tumhe hi sochta hoon."
I looked up at him. The city lights twinkled behind him, the rain created a soft soundtrack, and somewhere inside, I could hear Sujata aai humming an old Marathi song.
"Main bhi," I whispered back.
He kissed my forehead first. Sweet, gentle, like a promise. Then my cheek. Then, finally, my lips - soft and tentative and perfect.
It wasn't a movie kiss. It wasn't dramatic or wild. It was real. Two people from humble beginnings, trying to make it in a big city, finding each other in the chaos.
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Comments (1)
truly heart touching story.